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[@Virgil]
Nah your template is fine. It's just that.

Cause in your One Sun Post Aveless-Fall sectiom this happens. "and a sensation like rain-droplets pelting his face overcame him: Job to be done. Voice's orders. Meet at the Weeping-Gate within the Hour. Pack Light."

Tarkus talks to you lot in the before the fall section.(In the intro post the first part at the keep is in the future, the second part at the camp is in the past.)



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Right, swapped about.