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booty for him to plunder.


This is booty I can get behind.

Villains! You will rue the day you stole my popcorn!


Ey, watchu sayin' home skillet? Don't be messin' with no popcorn plunderers or we gon' have some problems!
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Still fiddling with it, but I think it's an ok first draft to show where I'm going with this.

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Cute Bumber daBumba! Yeeeyah!

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@Cute Bumber Yeah but, the funnest part of the sexy fingertips isn't the popcorn, it's the playful nibbling wholesome bonding you're enjoying with them.


Awwww yeeeeyah... :3~~

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"Stolen Popcorn" will be on the dessert menu now.

You may have questions, such as "stolen from where?", "what's in this buttery sauce?" and "why does my pancreas ache after eating these?". Fortunately, these questions and most others can be handled with one simple answer - you really don't want to know.


<3 for sure and! I think that sounds like that should totes be a repeated quote by our Cookie:

Crewmate ~ Hey Cookie, where did this meat come from cuz mine has two rings and a gold tooth in it?
Cookie ~ Oooohhhh... you really don't want to know.
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Fear not, the enterprising cook is probably just looking for more ingredients for his next great dish. ;)
As suggested ^above muhluv ;D

@Dark Wind@Cute Bumber Villains! You will rue the day you stole my popcorn!


Know what? Best be careful @Dark Wind just wants your popcorn cuz daBumba only talkin about fingertips. Dark Wind tho...

This is booty I can get behind.

Ey, watchu sayin' home skillet? Don't be messin' with no popcorn plunderers or we gon' have some problems!


As long as Dark Wind ain't after 'Treasure Chests' as well ;P

You guys soooooo fun and friendly <3 But like totes distracting...! daBumba neeeeeds to work on her charrie...! Ughs! Laaaaater ;D
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@Dead Cruiser

Pilot incoming.


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@FatherGaster So after reading through your character, I have a few things. The character is decent, but he just feels like a repurposed sci-fi character rather than one that is a part of this universe. That leads into my second point, that in the nature of this fantastic setting, Earth does not exist. You can be human, but just as in, say, Star Wars, Earth is never mentioned or alluded to. If you can fix that, and make him less of a generic sci-fo soldier, he'll be good to go.

@jasonwolf All in all a decent character. As funny as it would be to have this little gremlin be first mate, he's not a stable or intelligent enough character for that leadership role. My only notes are to go back and clean up your application, as you had some rather glaring typos thay detracted from its overall quality, and to rework your idea of a "world without plants," as that doesn't make sense to me from an ecological standpoint (perhaps there are photosynthesis-capable animals?).

@Dark Wind Looks good, he's accepted. I might have to draw the line on animalistic aliens soon, but we'll see.
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@Dead CruiserWell I was trying to show that he's actually really intelligent he's just also a murderous little sneak. I suppose the murderous streak doesn't exactly show great leadership capability, though. I do wish I could do more with the role, but in the end, he is just a good old fashion pirate.

As to the plant thing I'd probably fix it with adding oceans with proists (algae) as the replacement for plants as that's where arctic food chains normally start. I had just glanced over it and forgot to fix it.

As for errors like I said this is the first draft. I do all of the corrections after I know it's worth checking everything. Had you said new backstory all those corrections would be pointless.

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If anyone knows what I'm talking about, I was going to say he makes me think of Anomander Rake: the space version.


Dude that would be terrifying, fucking veers into a soletaken voidship instead.

I just started looking back at this site again after making an account forever ago, this stuff looks drool inducing, I think I'll just have try and wiggle my way in.
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@Rougespartan181

Little do we know we're all dead and enslaved on a hell-ship with our souls chained eternally.
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Best I can say this is good to go.



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Little do we know we're all dead and enslaved on a hell-ship with our souls chained eternally.


I'm jumping into wherever the chains meet, I'll turn into my original self.
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I have failed the gods of bb code
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As have we all, amigo.
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@Dark Wind Yep, looks good to go, accepted.
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@jasonwolf Mentioned the wrong fuckin dude whoops. Accepted.
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@Dead Cruiser Don't worry it's all good.

EDIT: Side note I'm very curious to find out how everyone else interacts with Valk. This will be very interesting.
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Quick round of notifications from folks I've not heard from in a bit. Just checking if y'all are still interested.

@Cute Bumber@Hank@Jeyma@Polybius


Still here. Still working. Just haven't been online in a day or two because I've been busy and distracted.
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Side note I'm very curious to find out how everyone else interacts with Valk. This will be very interesting.


This had me thinking about how long people had been on the Nova Dawn and the like; has everyone been on board for a while and generally knows about each other fairly well, is it a mix of brand new crew and old hands on a per-character basis, or is (and this would probably be kind of worrying) everyone basically new to the ship?

There's obvious drawbacks and benefits to whichever option @Dead Cruiser goes for, and it goes without saying that I'm a-okay with any of them, or some other way that I hadn't considered, but it'd be nice to know. I wouldn't want to assume one way and have it be the other ("Why are you acting like this is the first time you've seen a three foot tall fuzzy killing machine?") and throw people off their groove.

I probably should've asked this when we were at the "so, any questions?" phase of the Interest Check. Whoops.
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You have shamed us all with your incompetence.



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Personally, I'm always partial to the mixed newness crew (I think it offers the most RP fun, wherein some people can help provide a "fresh character's perspective" and others can provide the perspective of slightly less new crew members).

For Tel (the spymaster), I just figured she'd been on the ship for quiet some time (but not several hundred years, she wouldn't want to be the "old man" of the boat, so to speak), however, I'm happy to change that if needed.

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Sent @Dead Cruiser a draft of my CS, so pray for me friends. :3

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Oh sweet lords of the aether, grant thy dubious blessings upon the Prosiest of Holograms, let flow thy silken streams of serendipity to ease the suffering of such a pitiful being.
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@Hylozoist Hmm personally I feel like Valk has only been around a few months, but his noteriety preceeds him amongst at least part of the crew, and his personality would bring him to the attention of many others.
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