[quote=@Polybius] Looks good Gun, but I want to bring up the point that this is not a martial arts RP, and the story will make no mention of the lands or places you describe. If Chao is simply in the city of Teluval, that is fine. I guess what I'm getting at is, I don't want you to be disappointed in the story from the way you have built your character. If you simply want to play a killing machine that is fine too :)[/quote]This does not have to be a martial arts RP. You don't need to mention the lands I posted about. I simply like having a detailed back story. Chao is in Teluval. I do not believe I will be disappointed. Playing a killing machine who has a gambling problem and is a bit of a kleptomaniac is where I was heading.