Right, [@Drunken Conquistador], I finished it. As for criticisms...well, either I'm way too tired, or you did a really good job. I know you won't be able to focus on your character's religious/ethical beliefs *all* of the time, but it's definitely intriguing as an introduction to 'his world'.

Three walls up so far, hey-hey! (Also, I'm liking the colour-schemes for these posts...they're perrrrty.)

Edit: Good luck with that template.