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[@Azaria Blue] Thank you so much for telling me about some of my errors. Yeah, I did proof read it multiple times but sometimes things slip pass me. This roleplay has been in the process of being made for a little over twenty days. It got to a point where I woke up one morning and told myself that this roleplay will go up by the time the day ends. It turned out I was up late trying to meet my goal. 

As for the fighting... Hm... It could go multiple ways depending on what the head of each faction chooses. You said you were interested in the Masterminds, so I don't quite see them going in a head-to-head war with another faction. However I could see them scheming in the shadows, dripping poison here and there or making deals with the Muses to do their dirty work in secret so if anything does go wrong, it does not fall back on them. Politics can get vicious in the colony, perhaps to the point that it is voted among two faction leaders to execute another leader if he or she is guilty of treason. 

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Any time, just happy to help!

I was thinking along similar lines so I'm glad they mesh well with what you were thinking. I'll say you can definitely count me in!