Aw man, this is so nice to see. I mean, don't get me wrong, I love our action-y bits, but this is SUCH a nice change of pace. 

"Baby I've got standards." 
Heh. Almost made me laugh out loud. Senator's daughter, right? xD 

Mind if we traipse around Alderaan for a bit longer? I'd like to get in a scene with Yerbol and Neta before they leave. Maybe spend the night at her place before leaving for Manaan, then Onderon? I think it might neat to have them relax at a seaside resort type thing for a few days before Yerbol has an epiphany about Aria and...well, he's going to want to propose somewhere special, which would be Onderon. So I see the posting order like this:

-I can take care of Alderaan/beginning of Manaan 
-You can finish Manaan/begin discussion of Onderon
-I can finish discussion/get us there/Yerbol realizing that he's not letting Aria be anyone elses ever xD 
-We can do some exploration of Onderon if you like before Yerbol proposes(which I'm working on in my head as I type) 
-After the proposal, we end Act II and have an "interlude" of sorts where we write out the marriage and then...

Well, Act III, right? What do you think?