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@Spriggs27 I shouldn't have to. A good gm checks their rp regularily.
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While I'm not a GM by any stretch of the word, I can't help but look over some of these CS and question them a bit.

@Zelosse
A Crowd-control character isn't necessarily bad, though it is unnerving just how loaded with shutdowns and paralysis your character has. his first ability, just what prevents him from literally stopping his enemies with just a touch? Direct skin contact? Does it work on creatures who don't have flesh at all, like golems or skeletons? And just how long does it stop them? Five seconds is more than enough to paralyze someone and then slit their necks. Flash Freeze is even more questionable because that's an AoE freeze. While it may be short duration, how does it affect creatures who are immune to cold, like ice-based monsters or creatures constantly on fire? Just how intense is the freezing itself, or is it more like a stun? Does thorn vines rely on plant matter to create the thorns and vines, or can he just make that wherever he can use his magic? I think there was an actual spell in the anime that does something similar, but only does the binding. And while Steal is certainly magical in and of itself, Disarm seems more like a skill thing. But who knows how Konosuba handles such stuff so I'd say Disarm is just a more specific, but powerful form of steal that only removes weapons. Just my two cents.

@liferusher
Doesn't seem too bad all in all, though it could use some more details. Maybe a few more things about her personality? And what exactly does her new abilities as a Nekomimi grant? For Yaj, a human who came to the new world as a new race, he got heighten strength and durability while gimping his magical abilities. From what I've read it looks like Joy is more agile but has lower intelligence, but maybe you can add a bit more details to what a nekomimi grants. It is a god gift after all, so it should be sufficiently powerful. Maybe it gives her the ability to change into a cat, or survive great falls without being harmed, to create claws to slash her enemies, or even have nine lives. Something along those lines anyways.

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I don't know who you had in mind for a Co-GM, but I would like to formally ask if you'd accept me as a Co-GM. Some of these people are friends of mines too, so if they cause any trouble I'll make sure to straighten them out. Seems like we have a lot of players now and I'd hate to see this RP grind to a halt because the players don't have a GM to guide them.
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@Lucius Cypher alright. Ill touch uo on the details of each skill just so that it's a little more understandable power wise. Naturally though if a monster is on fire the freeze skill wouldn't do much, same with cold immunity.
As for the vines, no real plant material needed but soil is required. Cant shoot through stone to snare someone.
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Wow, Rex already got a nosebleed just by seeing beautiful women. He'll probably faint if he accidentally looks up Metel's skirt.
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Somebody knock over a girl with a skirt or lift a woman's skirt, either one works in this situation.

God what has my life devolved into? Telling people to do perverted things.
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Steal their underwear and then do that. Guaranteed kill.
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Man, I go to sleep once...

Now I have no clue what to react to first xD Ah well, nothing to do but to try anyway.
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Looks like I'm a Co-GM now. Good.

Let's get down to business.



This CS looks fine. Posted into the CS and post IC.



Looks good except the paralyzing touch. As I mentioned before, a lot could happen in five seconds. A lot more could happen in a minute, and without a solid idea of resistances and such, it'll be hard to determine just how long something might be stunned. I'd say just leave it as "paralyzed for ten seconds". Plenty enough to get the job done. If you want a longer lasting paralysis effect, you'll have to justify it by making it more difficult to land, longer to prepare, more costly, etc.



As I said before, this CS looks good. But the more the merrier, if you feel like it.
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The petty thief is LIVE
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Not yet son. Edit dat paralysis ability.
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@Lucius Cypher 10 seconds isn't so long. A minute.
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@Zelosse
Have you ever been in a fight? A punch, jab or stab can be done in a second. 5 seconds is already a dangerous amount of stun, 10 is already more than I'd give you. : /
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@Ryougu you ever robbed a persons backback? Pockets? Coat? Can't be done in 10s. You fall down and its already been 10s
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@Zelosse
A proper pickpocket does it while walking by or picks a target that stands still for a couple of seconds, without stunning his target. So 10 seconds is 10 seconds more than you need. Pickpocketing is all about speed and precision.

If you wish to simply take your time and scour through someone's backpack, then you aren't really pickpocketing and you might as well just steal the entire backpack.

Then finally, in the KonoSuba universe, just use the damn 'Steal' skill.
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@Lucius Cypher 10 seconds isn't so long. A minute.


Ten seconds is long enough to run up to a guy and knock them out with a kosh. As Ryogu said, a minute is long enough to kill, even if your only intentions are to steal. In this instance, the potential of your ability is far more important than the purpose of it.
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Wait I just Realized, Elren is a shitty thief, he takes too damn long. He takes a fucking minute what someone more skilled could do in seconds.
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I mean.. in the written world where a second can be an hour, and an hour can be a second, none of this really matters. Nor is thebsake of arguing about it.

Ill change paralyzing touch to better suit your aesthetic at the cost of mine. Hehe
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@Spriggs27
Wow, calm down dude. Harsh.

@Zelosse
Cool you're not making a big deal out of this. (I've met some people...) Glory to you.
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