[@Kenaron] Caring and thoughtless to me seem fairly opposing. I would like you to change one of those, perhaps snarky instead of thoughtless? Or maybe realist? (as opposed to an optimist or pessimist?) Other than that small issue, it looks good to me, I think you were able to pull my interest with Kiana's backstory and assets, very well done with the creative aspect! 

[@Juicy] Friday works for me, no worries there! Someone with more nefarious skills would be acceptable though a few thoughts to keep in mind, dark magic (if you're going that route) isn't something we'll uncover until we get deeper into outer space. And characters can have spotty backgrounds or who are paid killers for instance are fine, but at their core they should still be fairly good. If the world were to end I doubt we'd save evil folks above the nice guys. XD But say someone who makes deadly potions and sells them to make a living for their sick companion, would be an example.