[@LostBrotherGrimm] Interesting character, almost feels a little too modern for the setting but hopefully it works in the IC (like with the Ultimate Frisbee thing, parkour etc). I think the parents wouldn't have the term "scientists" but more "researchers" since I don't think the world even has a concept of "science" itself. And parkour wouldn't be much of a thing either though it could be changed to acrobatics. Other than those two tweaks, he looks good to me. [@GingerBaron] If you edit those things to your CS, you're free to post it in the CS tab. [@DracoLunaris] Alright, just as long as you've got some balance with him, you're also free to post him in the CS tab. [@Binary Reign] A different character, I can see some comedic charm but I'm going to have to mull over it a bit more. [@Juicy] Hey, I wasn't keeping a stopwatch so no worries (mostly because I spent most of last night moaning in pain because my stomach wanted to secede from the rest of my body) /siiiigh but anyway you've got an interesting character. All of you folks got interesting ones, I feel so lame. :/ But anyway he looks good...though I would prefer another picture of him, something less artsy/cartoonish and something more (I hate to say it, such cringe) anime ish? I know it's a tall order to find something to your liking when everyone in Google Search looks like they're 10-15 years old and overly emo/cute. But I would need a better visual of your fab character. Would that be doable? [@71452K] I have no idea why, might be the picture but I got a very Wolverine vision. Overall I think he'd be good, two tweaks I'd bring up though would be to maybe nix his amnesia? Considering he's about to be subjected to a big life change it might be a bit much. Maybe if you wanted to say he has issues with short term memory occasionally? Or I'd ditch it entirely. And like above, I'd like to see a bit better of a picture of possible even if it might just be a headshot? Something hand drawn is a bit hard for me to visualize. [@Kenaron] Nooo kidding lol