tbh yeah, I'm thinking that the majority of the post was good, but I'm a little iffy on movement speed. I had been planning on giving the other team at least five posts worth of uninterrupted travel time before Brock's arrival at the flag from a full sprint myself, so I'm kinda agonizing over the split between 'do cool things' and 'keep it reasonable'.

I'll get some more coherent thoughts up in the morning if this doesn't get totally resolved by then.