Hidden 7 yrs ago 7 yrs ago Post by Rockin Strings
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@Holy Soldier I can't think of something other than some strange magic item teleported him there. If you want to offer a suggestion, I'll listen. Other than that, you're not gonna get much from me in the way of changing the set story.

Edit: BTW, I posted for Steve in the inn. Didn't think to tag you for the NPCs. Should I just have him wake up after staying the night or somewhere else?
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@RokkuHoshiDo what you want guy. That's why this is a RP game. However, if you can't think of a current story for Raz, then I won't be approving him anytime soon. I'm not here to write for you. The NPCs are free game to be RPed as long as you don't do noob shit with them such as burning down an Inn, getting yourself in trouble with the cops (and I mean like GTA-level trouble), trying to start a world war, etc. Raziel doesn't need to be approved today so you got forever and a day to come up with a current story for him. I will suggest this. It'll be wiser for you to get involved with the GM event so your character can get to know others because it seems like several players are planning to hit up a bar.
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@DracoLunarisThe only thing I don't like is "1 cast per round." Because that's not a long enough cool down time especially when the second round is usually the response round.


fair point, I basically want to restrict it so I can only shield on target per volley of enemy attacks but still have it be common enough that i can move it around to use the other abilities or worrying if i should save this for a more deadly attack. because that is what the invulnerability spell is for. is once every 2 rounds better?

Yes! Every bit of yes! I've never even actually played League, but I fucking LOVE Taric! Also, you're now officially the resident support main. Lol.

Edit: I forgot to mention, but Fox will probably bring drink of his own... maybe. Haven't decideded yet.


Yup, at this rate bravo squad will be my own personal team I send out on missions to help the others or something

If fox is bringing drink then he and Naija and anyone who'd wan't to join could hang out in a corner of the funeral for a bit bing miserable so we catch the next weekend ending of the funeral scene. Because the other problem with being in a bar rather than a funeral is it's my idea, so i would have to write why Naija was there when she dos not know what a bar is. of have money to buy drinks with. I should get her that girl a dictionary and a part time job at some point.

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@DracoLunarisI wasn't entirely sure if he would or not. I'll let the rest of the scene after my first post decide that. Lol. Right now, I'm trying to get the more important stuff figured out; like finishing my next character(s) and figuring out how I'm going to introduce them.
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Hello! I saw this place was still accepting and was hoping I could join. I read through the info and posted a character up. I feel there might be a few issues with my character, so I'm interested to get some feedback on him.

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@Crosswire I'm no GM... but first off, you post your characters in the OCC first to have it get reviewed by the GM. Once its reviewed and is confirmed to be good, THEN you post it to the CS. I'm just saying really.
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@LmpkioGah! I'm sorry I didn't realize that. Talk about a bad first impression. I edited out my post in the character section. Sorry!


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@Crosswire All good, no worries. He looks fine to me, but I'll let the GM decide for himself.
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@Lmpkio That's a relief. I like Jack, but he's kind of...bland due to the throw away nature of the game he comes from. So I didn't have a whole lot to work with. Honestly I'm hoping I can get him some in game to spice him up a bit as time goes on.
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@CrosswireHey. I'm not GM either, but if you're just looking for general feedback, I'd say you should probably switch Shadow and Jack's pistol. Namely because the pistol is a weapon (obviously), and Shadow, I think, technically qualifies as a familiar, which takes up an ability slot, as far as I can tell. Also, you seem to have described Bullet Time as more of an ability than a strength, but you would have to talk to him about that. With that said...

@NerevarineTry mentioning GM. He might have missed your submission.
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@Etherean FireThanks for the tip Etherean, I'll do that now. I just wasn't sure to to approach general abilities. Since it was describe was what a character gets/can get in their respective games. Since Jack pretty much has everything from the start I wasn't sure how to approach that. I'll rewrite some things now that I have a better grip of that.
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@Holy Soldier I think I fixed Raziel's story. I'll have Steve find something to do. Might enter him into the arena.
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@Holy Soldier

Shantae's profile is currently under construction. For now, I'll get a post up for Frisk. ^_^
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@RokkuHoshiRaziel looks good. Go ahead and add him.

@NerevarineChange Knuckles strength from 100 to 500 metric tons to 1 to 5 metric tons. I have never seen Knuckles capable of lifting ocean liners. Also delete all that nonsense in the Achievements section. That area is meant to be blank. Once you have done that mention me again for a final look over.
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@Holy SoldierW-what about me Mr. GM sir? Is my character OK? If there's problems with him then I'll make any changes necessary.
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@DracoLunarisI suggested it so...

@CrosswireFirstly, you are so lucky that your RP buddies were looking out for you because if I had seen first that you outright submitted your character to the approval area of my game, I would have rejected it and ignored all of your applications. That is a huge pet peeve of mine and 99.9% of GMs hate that shit so don't ever do it anywhere else.

I see they also helped you make changes I would have called you out on. Jack is good to go. Just edit him back in where you had him.

I see Jack being met at the unnamed bar @DracoLunaris and @Etherean Fire plan to have their characters go to.
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@Holy SoldierOh. I should probably clarify. I didn't plan on hitting bar. Fox will be at funeral (likely isolated) like everyone else. At most, he would have a flask/vial/whatever of "definitely water," and that's if it fit for whatever followed. Lol.
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@Holy Soldier Alright, made the edits you asked
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@DracoLunarisI suggested it so...

@CrosswireFirstly, you are so lucky that your RP buddies were looking out for you because if I had seen first that you outright submitted your character to the approval area of my game, I would have rejected it and ignored all of your applications. That is a huge pet peeve of mine and 99.9% of GMs hate that shit so don't ever do it anywhere else.

I see they also helped you make changes I would have called you out on. Jack is good to go. Just edit him back in where you had him.

I see Jack being met at the unnamed bar @DracoLunaris and @Etherean Fire plan to have their characters go to.


;w; I'm sorry! It was an honest mistake. I swear I'm an experienced roleplayer but I'm still kind of new to this site so I don't know how everything works. Back where I used to RP, we got in trouble if we posted our characters in OOC instead of the Character section so it's been kind of hard to unlearn that or simply remember that's not the case here.

Despite that I'm happy Jack's good to go. I'll edit him in now.

Also, yeah I can totally see Jack's first appearance being in a bar boozing it up. Thanks for letting me know that. I'm still reading through the RP, but I should be done in a bit.
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@NerevarineGo ahead and post him up. Approved.
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