[@Crosswire]Hey. I'm not GM either, but if you're just looking for general feedback, I'd say you should probably switch Shadow and Jack's pistol. Namely because the pistol is a weapon (obviously), and Shadow, I think, technically qualifies as a familiar, which takes up an ability slot, as far as I can tell. Also, you seem to have described Bullet Time as more of an ability than a strength, but you would have to talk to him about that. With that said...

[@Nerevarine]Try mentioning GM. He might have missed your submission.