[quote=@Jarl Coolgruuf]
[@Antarctic Termite] That's a lot to think about and I'll definetly reconsider well [i]everything[/i]. Admittedly, it was my first idea and I did jump the gun with presenting it. Thank you for your advice.
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Don't you worry. Just find what you feel is unique about Pelegath and build on that while keeping an eye open for separate ideas that you also find fun. Sometimes all it takes to write a nice character is two themes and a personality that clicks with both.

I'm looking forward to whatever you do.