[quote=@HeySeuss]
So far so good, though on the balance of 'developed powers' versus 'undeveloped powers' I feel like people should be aware that if they are taking innate powers now, they are probably locking themselves down a bit. I want to figure out how to strike a balance. I also think that it's not a bad idea to have characters that have physical feature alterations to contend with in some way, things that give them away. 

This is a setting about tension, and I think having characters that are on the run and confused is a very good start.
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I did originally have more physical alterations for Jay, but I wasn't too sure about them and figured it was just best to post the base character first so that it'd be easier to change things if needed.

I was going to give her gray/white hair as a sort of way to signify that the life was drained out of her, but I felt like it might be too anime-ish and held back on it. Also, I should say now that the inspiration for her is actually a Pokemon, Shedinja. So because of that I was going to also give her a hole in the back of her head, but I was worried that might be too much of a blatant rip off. What's your opinion on these?