[quote=@Er0r] Alright, I sorta changed over from Little John... I think I filled out everything? Not sure what all I did right xD but here's my attempt. [hider=Lancer]Class Name: Lancer Nicknames: Slayer of the Minotaur Alignment: Lawful Good Servant of: ??? Catalyst For Summon: Theseus's Black Sail Weapon(s): Sword, Bronze Spear Wish: To become king once more. [hider=Skills] Magic Resistance: C Independent Action: B Divinity: B[/hider] [hider=Base Parameters] Strength: B Endurance: C Agility: A Magical Power: D Good luck: B Noble Phantasm: A[/hider] [hider=Noble Phantasms] [hider=The Six Labours] Quote: "That's a mighty fine ability. Let me see if it's any good." Rank: A Type: Anti-Treasure Range: Short Description: Up to a maximum of six times, Lancer can steal an opponent's activation of a noble phantasm or ability to cancel the effects and use it for himself.[/hider] [hider=Minotaur's Labyrinth] Quote: "A sacrifice must be made at the end of every Great Year." Rank: B Type: Labyrinth Range: A 6 acre circle, centered around Lancer. Description: Combatants within 96 yards are summoned forth into a labyrinth with walls that reach the heavens. Their starting location are parallel of the distance and direction from Lancer. A maze of passages 4 feet wide twist and branch off every few feet with no conceivable exit. A Minotaur roams the maze attacking anyone and everyone until either it or Lancer is defeated; thus ending the phantasm. This can only be used once, and only during every seventh year. [*note*, I put this here for flavor mostly. If you want to allow me to use it, I don't mind removing the restriction as most people probably don't know about the seven or nine year rule. As of the 2012 setting in first post, the next 'use' of this wouldn't be until 2016 for either case.][/hider][/hider] [hider=True Name][url=https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Theseus]Theseus[/url][/hider] [hider=Appearance][img]http://i.imgur.com/hiquLwL.jpg[/img][/hider][/hider] [/quote] First ability is anti-unit, due to it affecting the singular. It is also broken as all hell. No noble-phantasm should be able to make the user use other noble phantasm’s unless they are weapon based. The ability should not be able to cancel, if it should be able to ‘steal’ noble phantasm, it should only be able to steal weapon based noble phantasms or equipment such as armor. If that was the case it would be okay Second ability is anti-army and is actually pretty good, I like it.