[@Darkmoon Angel] She looks good! Just one thing: your first trainer doesn't currently have any official Pokemon, but she can catch one asap IC. Just keep in mind that your character has just gotten her Pokeball prior to your first IC post, and you're good to go! Go ahead and post her in the CS section :)

Also, don't forget to use something like this to keep track of your stats for your first post:

[hider=John’s Pokedex]
[b]Rank: [/b]Beginner
[b]Organization: [/b]Poke Corp

[b]TP:[/b] 10 +1 = 11 TP

[b]Inventory:[/b][list][*]Pokeball x 1
[*]Potion x 2
[/list]
[b]Pokemon:[/b][list][*]Unnamed — Pikachu (20)
[*]Unnamed — Pichu (1) [/list]
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CP: 10 +1 = 11[/hider]
Feel free to tag me if you have any questions!