[@CowboyCommando] Kudos on the OP, it's quite thorough. I don't think I'll be joining- turnbased dicebased roleplaying isn't my thing, I'll play X-Com if I want that- but a tip for ya, if you don't mind a bit of friendly criticism: Distinguish between the need for a comma or a period, and always make sure you don't have sentence fragments. I don't know about others, but it's very... almost disruptive when reading a bunch of your stuff, and you have something like this: [quote]Description of Civilization:Many rumors surround the nature of the Curators, and who their creators might've been. [b]As the Vartauri had found them alone[/b] on the planet of Aspiron. [b]A metropolis spanning the the surface and bellow[/b]. Tended by the Curators in the hopes that one day, the “Clients” would come. [b]The clients defined as the sentient species of the galaxy[/b]. The guidelines, procedures, and actions they took to convince the Vartauri to bring about the first Interstellar Concordance hard coded eons ago.[/quote] Several of the sentences in here are written as if they belong to the sentence before them, but they're standalone- and so it doesn't flow very well and kinda messes me up when I read it. It may not be a problem for anyone else, but that's how it is for me. You might instead want to write it similar to this: [quote]Description of Civilization: Many rumors surround the nature of the Curators, and who their creators might've been. [b][s]As [/s]The Vartauri had found them alone[/b] on the planet of Aspiron- [b]a metropolis spanning the the surface and below[/b]. Tended by the Curators in the hopes that one day, the “Clients” (as defined as any sentient and intelligent species) would come. [s][b]The clients defined as the sentient species of the galaxy[/b][/s]. The guidelines, procedures, and actions they took to convince the Vartauri to bring about the first Interstellar Concordance hard coded eons ago.[/quote]