my posts are generally to the point and medium sized. and considering this is a d20 game and not just text-based, i think some of its going to be up to dice rolls anyway so writing it out would be redundant. 

"scores a 16 perception"

"you notice the man has a scar on his face"

"notices a man with a scar on his face, how peculiar."

instead i would just write a reaction to the scar.


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"scores a 16 perception"

"notices a man with a scar on his face"

"is appalled by the ghastly scar on his face, as it is appalling."

lol