A few things I'd like to know: Could you describe the style of the city and its buildings as well as the tournament arena? I'd like to get a strong visual and pictures or a likeness would also be appreciated but not required. Do you have issue creating an NPC(s) if I had Hisame come in as a competitor in the tournament? I think this particular path has a lot of potential; perhaps quite long but I perceive you enjoy writing to a great degree. I noticed you only have a partial list of Truths? Do you plan to add more? I don't mind one way or the other. By the way I am elated to see how much effort you put into your posts. This shall be fun indeed.