[quote=@Conscripts]
 Though I may have to ask you to reconsider the small part when Doyun and the ship escape the Neryn armada. If you mean the ambush that decimated the entire Tawai navy, then I suggest making them and a few other ships escaped, since I intend to make it so that several ships in the ten ships fleet escaped the battle, regrouped to fight the one last stand (including my character, haha sorry)
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This part yeah sure I can change that. I'm not too attached to that. Only thing I would have fought on is the set of up the ship and the fishing rod really. Everything else totally willing to change. I'll go and do that. Thanks man.