Alright, I'm looking at sheets right now. Again, don't take my critique personally (as I'm rather picky when it comes to my roleplays). [@Elle Santiago] I'd like it if you can make her biography a little bit longer, if you can. Other than that, everything seems fine. [@RumikoOhara] The major issue with your CS is its formatting and grammar. There are many run on sentences and phrases that don't really make sense. If you put the sheet through a word processor, and correct the flaws, then that should be it for the grammar issue. Another issue is that her healing powers should [i]not[/i] be that strong as of now. The flower part is alright (since it's just flowers and not actually a human being), but she can't heal someone having a heart attack. The most healing she can do is sealing shut decent sized wounds or partially healing broken bones. Daphne should have some flaws. The whole story about the 5th grade class being chased around by her is unlikely (and not really fitting). You can have it that she cares too much about people that it begins to bother them, etc. The names you use, like Mooncat, are funky, but I assume that ties into the "hippie" part of her raising. Also, you should read over the rules again; there's something that should be added that you didn't add. Other than that, I think the sheet should be okay. [@Pathfinder] The sheet's alright! Put Jude in the character tab. [@Project] First off, the picture is fine cause it doesn't look too realistic and can actually be passed off as realistic anime. One thing is, I'm confused about her appearance section. You keep using the past tense... is that how she looks now, or how she USED to look? You're also leaving something out from the rules section, so take another look.