[quote=@Holy Soldier] So her pinky situation would hardly be an issue and wouldn't have been permanent.[/quote] okie. i'll have to think more on this or erase it from my cs. [quote=@Holy Soldier]Neo Corp still continues to develop new technology, but they also have secretly gone rogue in their research and once again started to experiment on abducted Zoanthropes, creating abominations in their mission to design the ultimate soldier.[/quote] i think i want her brother to become abducted instead. that would give her a reason to hate neo corp & want to fight against them. thanks for the evaluations, i'll fix it tomorrow. :] [@Holy Soldier][b]update:[/b] finished.