[@FancyHats] I'll ask you to complete the missing bits, and then will formally accept. I liked the audition quite a bit!

[@The1Rolling1Boy] I will humbly ask for another draft, if you're willing? The core of what is there is excellent- I do like it. But I find it's a bit more tell than show, if that makes sense? The audition is where I'm putting the most weight on accepting/rejecting characters, so please feel free to take your time to fluff it out a bit? Thank you so much for all the work you've done so far!