[@caliban22] The sheet is a bit too short. Also some clarification would be nice on what exactly the blaster rifle and blaster pistol he carries are. What are his exact skills from being a soldier? Also he doesn't have any others outside of that? A few more faults would be nice too. Personality is alright, if a bit short as well. 

Backstory needs to be stretched out a bit. What planet was he born on? How was his childhood? How was his time fighting for the Empire? What'd he think of it? How was his experience in war? How long has been a merc for? It just needs some 'fluffing', make the backstory like at least three solid paragraphs, fix the other stuff and the sheet will look good to go I'm sure.