[quote=Lesli] @IVIasterjay :--- Your Ame ANBU :I would lower the speed. He already has a technique that 'greaty' increases his speed. Combined with his S ranked Technique, I wouldn't like to add an 'incredible' speed to it. It causes the S ranked to become already kind of OP in my eyes, together with some other techniques. If you would be so kind to reduce it to average speed than it has my approval.[/quote] Changed to "Average". [quote]Your Konoha geninI am not sure if the weapon/hat is a joke or such. But a floating hat that eats people (sorry, I am trying not to sound too serious about it.), but that is a no from me. [/quote] The hat is controlled using the contact version of her Mind Transfer False Body Animation jutsu. The inside is lined with her targeting tags, and it's being controlled by her mind. It "flies" similar to an umbrella flying in the wind, and it "eats people" by closing around their body. [quote]Also, she has sensing transmission, but no sensory technique? If she has one, would you please set in the jutsu link together with a little detail about how far and such? Else she wouldn't have much with the sensory transmission technique.[/quote] Nope, she hasn't learned any Sensing Techniques yet. The application I'm imagining right now it to allow others to see through the eyes of her animated objects by touching her physical body. I guess that would fall under the Mind Body Transmission Technique though, so I'll just get rid of Sensing Transmission for now. [quote]The custom techniques are a bit hmmm. Well one can remove a tag, she can activated the jutsu on miles away. That needs to be toned down if its a D ranked technique. Not to mention that it sounds like an auto-hit technique (of course when the tag is planted, something that can't be done automatically ), but I am against auto-hitting technique. So if you would please change that please.The last custom technique is a bit confusing. If it fails, it works? Sorry, but I can't work my head around that one. [/quote] I changed the first custom jutsu to merely be a condition of the second custom jutsu. And to understand how it works, just think of how a golem works. A piece of paper in the mouth bring it to life, and if it's removed the golem becomes inanimate.