[quote=@The Wyrm] (Place names and such are rough ideas. Open to changing them) Actually, whole thing is a bit rough right now. Let me know if you want changes or have ideas! [Hider=The Broken Hammer Clan] [b]Clan Name:[/b] Broken Hammer [b]Jarl/Chief/King Name & Description:[/b] Jarl Geirlaug Åsmundottir [b]Alias:[/b] Klyppr - 'Cutter' [b]Government Type:[/b] Earldom [b]Non Human Species Descriptions:[/b] The Broken Hammer are allied with the Bloodaxe Giant Clan. [b]Location:[/b] The Broken Hammer inhabit the Southlands, in the aptly named Deep Wood that stretches from the jagged Ocean of Tears to the savage Dawnstar Mountains. [b]Religion:[/b] WIP - Need players! [b]Clan Description:[/b] The Broken Hammer are a powerful Clan located in the South of the Broken Lands along the Ocean of Tears. This harsh and cliff strewn region has seen it's fair share of warfare as the Clan wages a never ending war with The Salished Empire. Broken Hammer longships slide from small rocky harbours to wage a savage war of hit and run raids on Imperial subjects while the Imperial Navy seeks to sweep them from the seas. The Broken Hammer itself gets it's name from the Ancient Ones ship that is wrecked in their principal harbour. The massive hulk, battered by never ceasing seas, bears a great hammer on the prow, a hammer that has long since lost its upper half and now lies embedded in the sand on the beach. The Jarls Hall is built into the old hull, patched with wood and stone from the surrounding land. The Broken Hammer are slightly smaller than their northern neighbours, and certainly much smaller than the Bloodaxe Giant Tribe. They wage war with brutal ferocity like all those in the Broken Lands, the strongest among them wielding vicious jagged headed hammers. [b]Clan History:[/b] WIP - Need players! [b]Regional Geography/Resources/Economy Details:[/b] The Broken Hammer live in a region known as the Deep Wood, so called for the dense and lush forest that blankets the region. Bordered to the north by jagged mountains, and the south and west by rocky cliffs with small natural openings that lead to excellent harbours. Resources here are plentiful in food sources, lumber, stone, and coke for the smelting of iron to make weapons. [b]Important Characters:[/b] Jarl Geirlaug Åsmundottir is the Jarl of the Broken Hammer Clan. She has earned the title through combat and cunning, as one must to be Jarl of the Broken Hammer. Tall, blonde, with a single sharp green eye, she is beautiful by any standards. Her otherwise stunning visage is somewhat marred by left eye being gone, pulped by an enemies sword pommel during a raid on the Salished Empire. [b]Important Holdings/Territory/Possessions:[/b] The Broken Hammer have two principal settlements, their Capital of Askasmiðr, built around the shattered Ancient Ones ship, and the Bjarneyja, a fortified city of stone and wood located at the heart of the Deep Wood. The two are connected by the Rauða River. There are numerous smaller settlements located throughout the region, none coming close in size to either of the cities. [b]Relation to other Factions:[/b] WIP - Need more players! [/hider] [/quote] Looks good! A few thoughts: 1) would love to see more detail on the giants and what their deal is. 2) Maybe resources in the Deep Wood are not really plentiful (besides wood, obviously). Hunting/gathering probly can't sustain a large Clan, and mining is probably tough in what is essentially a wilderness. Since the whole Clan is built around raiding the South, why not have that be one of the main reasons they do so? For resources.