[@Kuroyomihime]

You're right.  I re-read it and re-wrote it.  There were entire layers of meaning that hadn't made it from my head to my fingers.  I hope the updated version is alright.  Sorry for the trouble.  This headache is killing me.  I'm going home to take a nap...

Oh, carp... I still have to go to the store.  Well, at least this headache isn't a migraine yet.  That's the last thing I need.

That said... if there are any other suggestions or alterations that you have/want done just let me know.  I have no problem using the edit button.  ;)