[quote=@Foster] [@Kuroyomihime] Entire last paragraph: Underslines for emphasis and strikethrough-substitutions added for clarity of action/intent: Parts in [Brackets] were not part of original post. But tagging the sniper/spotter team instead of engaging a possible 3rd/4th enemy team is actually fine by me if things turned out that way, it's really just a nitpick. Since it seemed as though some of that post was a reaction to it seeming too easy for the group. Since [u]by Clem's count[/u], in addition to your reply, [u]GSRT is facing between nine to twelve active hostiles from across four opposing teams.[/u] And her focus is mostly on suppression and damage-control [[i]they're at risk of getting steamrolled on their right flank harder than that halftrack-crew in the video[/i]] long enough for her team-mates to get out of the killzone. Once clear, [u]Megumi may use explosion-magic to her heart's content.[/u] [/quote] Actually no, they aren't. They are facing two teams of four enemies (with two already dead) at the moment. Maybe I should have said it before, but the fact that you located the whole enemy team on your previous post without asking anything about their positions was kind of close to godmodding since I only mentioned one sniper on the 1st post, not their whole team. However, because, I didn't say anything in a timely manner, I couldn't ask you to edit it, much less punish you retroactively by voiding your post. I had her ran into a team (the sniper and spotter), but not the whole enemy team since there's no way to know if a team is two, three, or four men for sure until you get some kills. She could understandably think that they were the whole team, I suppose. That said, I can totally add more enemies if you want. It'll not be a bother at all, really. [quote=@Haeo] [@Kuroyomihime] You're right. I re-read it and re-wrote it. There were entire layers of meaning that hadn't made it from my head to my fingers. I hope the updated version is alright. Sorry for the trouble. This headache is killing me. I'm going home to take a nap... Oh, carp... I still have to go to the store. Well, at least this headache isn't a migraine yet. That's the last thing I need. That said... if there are any other suggestions or alterations that you have/want done just let me know. I have no problem using the edit button. ;) [/quote] No worries, everyone does mistakes every now and then. I'll take a look at it in a little. If there's anything else that needs to be fixed, I'll tell you.