[@ACHTUNG]: I don't think you're thinking of "concept" in the right way. They're meant to be sort of iconic, in a way? With my character, the idea of a "Festival" instantly brings something specific to mind. "Concept of a Pitched Battle" is both too generic and also overly-involved.

With the Archetype you picked, wouldn't "Artillery" work better? You'd probably have to rewrite her powers, but I think that would ultimately lead to a more cohesive powerset. ^^;

[@Raineh Daze]: Accepted.

Sorry for the delay on getting started, it won't be too much longer. ^^;