[quote=@RisingSun]Ok there we go. It should all be the right name now[/quote]

[h1][b]There are still a bunch of 'Lucien' references in your sheet. I counted nine.[/b][/h1]


[quote=@RisingSun]
A weakness doesn’t always have to do with one’s personality. The things I’ve listed could bring the character down just as well. However, if you’re adamant on one regarding personality, you can say he’s overly ambitious which I do believe I’ve mentioned but just not in the “Weaknesses” field.
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Indeed it doesn't. But this is GoT and advanced. There's no room for Ser Gary of House Stu. I want to see flawed characters. Nobody's perfect. The 'overly ambitious' route can work, as it's a common one and has led to many a man/woman's downfall. It's also just [i]one[/i] element. Where are his quirks? His peeves? Doubts and guilt? I still can't help but feel that Matthos, in his current state, is a flat character.

[quote=@RisingSun]And perhaps in the future[/quote]

Now. A Great House consisting of just the one guy is not the way to go about it. Branch out, challenge yourself. Multiple POVs make it more fun and immersive, and offer other player characters more chance to interact with yours. Picking a Great House implies you facilitate roleplay and pick up more than just the one character.

To me the House Sheet falls short of the mark, particularly since it is a Great House. You must realise we scrutinise these even more than lesser ones. Perhaps the other GMs may chip in when they have time [@Ruby] and [@Ezekiel].