@pyroman: Sounds great! Can't wait to see the CS.

@Azreal: Okay, Azreal, so we have a couple problems with your CS here. The first and foremost is the magic weapon you listed: we feel it is far too much for this RP and I don't think there's any way we could really allow it in the adventure. It's simply too powerful in all aspects and even 'toned down' I don't think we can accept it.
The mentor is great and the general backstory is sound but we would like to see things backed up a little bit and perhaps more focused on an ongoing training than on a 'he taught me things when I was six and then died'. It's also very unlikely that a six-year-old would have picked up so many advanced skills. 
Might we suggest that Mr. Hobbs never died and has apprenticed you as an assassin, though perhaps you've only made your first kill recently (or are preparing too), and you two could be passing through the town, gathering information on a particular target in the area.

@Asuna: Space just opened up (gotta check on what roles are still open though)! GET ON IN HERE!

@Milkman: I think the CS looks really good! The only issue I can see is that you have a few too many villager skills listed (we'd like to see no more than 3). I think you could drop 'Attention to Detail' but that seems to be part of 'Photographic Memory', in my mind and maybe you could drop cooking? You could reasonably say she's just starting out learning how to cook, that she [i]wants[/i] to learn how to cook, and hasn't quite developed the skill for it yet.

@Ollumhammersong: I'm omw out the door so I'll take a look at your CS in a bit!