Okay, finished reading up on your bio, Oskar. There is nothing wrong with Glair himself, skills and equipment wise (though you do not have to list speech and mercantile, and can replace them if you wish). There is, however, some issues with your bio, as I am understanding it. His parents met with Thalmor representatives long before the Thalmor were actually established and before the Dominion existed. The Thalmor reformed (after being disbanded by Tiber Septim when he took power) in 4E22, while that part of your bio took place in 3E183. We will need to figure out some sort of solution to that issue before I can accept him. 

Also, New Yorker is right on the mages guild thing, but I think it is reasonable that smaller, local organizations could have formed after the fall of the Mages Guild.