[quote=@Stormflyx]
A few things I've noticed, however. You mention in the appearance section that she is a cook - but it's not brought up again, and you switch to medic. Was this intentional? 
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No it wasn't. I just suck at proofreading.



[quote]Her goal is also very vague - I'd like to see something more specific to her. I think you can find that by just going over your sheet again, and thinking about the character some more. [/quote]


I honestly couldn't really come up with a goal for her other than trying to survive in this crazy universe ([s]and then failing at that and getting subsumed by reapers[/s]).