Okay, review time! Here we go: [@Wolfieh] You've already seen my feedback on discord. Looking forward to RPing with Vali [@Th3King0fChaos] Phew, that was a lot to read. Kol looks good. He's a little bit main character-esque, but I've RPed with you enough now that I'll trust you to play him responsibly in service of crafting a good storoy. Now, finish his CS when you have the chance! [@YummyYummy] Overall, you know I like Arnaud. He's been preapproved. The one thing that I can't help but nitpick, though, is that he looks like two [i]entirely[/i] different people in his two pictures. If you can find some way to bring those in line a bit, that'd be ideal. [@Atalanta] The same goes for Osanna. I also like her new pic a lot better. One small thing is the formatting on her age/gender/loyalty/calling header. Maybe just 'Rezaindian Order' to give yourself a bit more room for spaces? That's up to your discretion, though and it's an extreme nitpick on my part. The 'the' does add some force to it, after all. [@A Lowly Wretch] Alright, so I've now read and reviewed! Nettle is bizarre in an intriguing and potentially humourous way and, if you can play her to form should be a really fun character to have around. Overall, I like her! Below, I have a few recommendations. 1) The demonym for yasoi is, indeed, yasoi. Strange as it is, no need to tack 'an' onto the end. 2) I'd recommend reading through once more and just doing some quick editing in terms of typos, repeated words, and such. 3) know you like to draw your reference pics, but if you can find something a bit more in-depth and vivid in the next few weeks for a planned collage, that'd be appreciated. 4) I'm wary of any 5W that high. It's the equivalent of a 9+ RAS, which is very, [i]very[/i] rare. It's world-warping level magic. To use some THO references, you're playing on Benny, Traveler, and Hugo levels. I'm going to provisionally approve this pending a conversation we'll hold on discord about your character's actions, goals, and storyline ideas. If fifth wheel is necessary for those, then maybe we can find a way to make it work. [@Ti] Overall, I like Asier and really appreciate how you worked his legend in lol. That was great! As far as recommendations going forward... 1) Editing stuff like demonyms, possessives, slew/slain, and the like. Give it a once over and try to clean those up. 2) This is the dark ages and the nobility are still a martial class mostly, so I don't think there'd e quite as much traditional noble snootiness and outright disdain. It's more like, "they all say you're so great, but you just look like another smelly Tourrare horseman to me. Prove the stories true." Basically, they're resistant to being impressed and he'll have to show them. [@Dao Ma] I absolutely [i]love[/i] Maerec. He is everything that a knight should be with just enough of a twist to make him unique and interesting. I don't have a lot in the way of improvements to offer, but see below! 1) This is very well written, but I have to imagine that this was just a small error and it might bug you if you didn't catch it: [i]It is hard to say at first that if he genuine or if it is for formality's sake.[/i] There was also a 'diffuse' that I think was meant to be a 'defuse'.