First thing to take care of is the confusion with the secondary characters. This is just a character for background use, not necessarily a supporting character for your heroes. It’s as much a character for my use as it is yours. For instance when setting up a villain, rather than have them attack your characters a few secondary characters will take one for the team, or be possessed by a villain, or whatever the scenes call for. 

I tried giving notes on everything posted in the thread. Even the approved sheets had some things that needed to be altered. Nothing major, but I’m just looking for certain types of characters for this. 

[@Birdboy] – Shining Knight – APPROVED! The only thing I would need altered is the Secondary character. I like the idea you already have a backup guy if your primary hero falls in battle, but for the reasons I mentioned above I need another established hero. Since you’re using Shining Knight I’d recommend another 7S character like Vigilante, Crimson Avenger, or even a still alive non-traitor Boy Blue. 

[@Divine Darkness] – Artemis – CS Incomplete – Still looking forward to what you come up with though. It’s been awhile since the Society had an archer in its ranks. 

[@Archmage MC] – the Runekeeper – As is its not what I’m looking for. The character would need reworked into the DCU and it doesn’t seem ‘superhero’ enough. I dig that look though. 

[@Blizz] – Nocturne – APPROVED! Only notes I have are for the Secondary Character again. Change it up to somebody we can beat on. 

[@Martian] – Jade – APPROVED! I love Jade, but this reads like an old wiki focusing on that 90’s era of GL, right down to the plant powers. Drop the stuff with Kyle Rayner and getting a ring and just keep her as her own hero and she’s good. Maybe make Amazing Man your Secondary Character?

[@rocketrobie2] – Mercy – Not what I’m looking for. I like that you thought outside of the box but there are no ties really to the legacy of the JSA with this one, and I’ve always just seen her as Lex Luthor’s bodyguard. That whole ‘Everyman Project’ era was weird af. If you just want somebody with a bionic arm there’s that version of Magog that was in the JSA, basically DC’s spin on Marvel’s Cable and the extreme anti-heroes of the 90’s. You’ve written Capt. Marvel/Shazam and Silver Scarab in past RP’s, I’d love to see you rework one of them again for this.