[quote=@Theyra]
Being a New Republic deserter in the New Jedi Order will cause problems, mainly the relationship between the Order and the New Republic. You can say she left the New Republic after the Valdont. That and there being a legion of sith apprentices is very unlikely, so how about removing that bit?
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Lol yeah I definitely got hyperbolic there with the legion, how about like... A Sith lord and their apprentice? Basically just need an excuse for her to hate the Sith, something for her to overcome in training. Totally down with deleting any metion of Sith tho. Also, removed the deserting aspect! 

As an aside, you mentioned they should have the core Force abilities, but which ones are included in this? Not entirely sure, thanks!