[quote=@Mirandae] [center][img]https://i.imgur.com/ZpkHH63.png[/img] [img]https://i.imgur.com/eFLpzor.png[/img] [color=A9A8AF]Hello All, Today is the day to go over the character sheets that need some relatively minor changes before we can approve them. Aside from [@Alfhedil], whom we've already discussed with in private, please look at the required adjustments for your character and make the necessary changes to your character sheet. Please resend your revised character sheet to [@Aeolian] in PM or repost it in the OOC thread by EOD Sunday Jul 2, EST. [@Alfhedil] Go ahead and move your character sheet over to the character tab. Once your character art is done, you can add it retroactively; that's when we'll make the character blurb for Corrina too. Aesthetically, it doesn't work without the character art. lol Thanks! [/color] [/center] [center] [color=ed1c24]House of Harold[/color] [@Crimson Flame] [h2][color=7ea7d8]Taegan “Tae” Granlock[/color][/h2] [color=A9A8AF]1. The reputation section should be 1 to 2 well-written paragraphs, so please expand on this. 2. Expand the goals section to a few more sentences. Gives us more insight into what Tae wants to accomplish, whether that be during his time at Harold's Academy or after graduation, and why? 3. Expand the "Mystic Code" section to at least a paragraph. Give us more details about what his light manipulation can do. [/color] [/center] [/quote] [url=https://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/5457545]Sorry for taking so long. But I think I fixed it.[/url] [s]In their heart, Tae is still an Illuminaire[/s]