[quote=@GubGar] Right on! I dig the mini-stories in Caty's backstory, makes them feel like cliffnote versions of story arcs from her comic run. I'm just glad it wasn't too much. On my end, I might add a bit to my 'anything else to add' section, but beyond that I think Oliver is good to go. [/quote] Thank you! That's kind of what I was going for. I really wanted y'all to be able to visualize the journey. And I love Oliver's story as well. Makes me want to make sure that the team gets back to their universe safely so they can continue their journeys and stories. [quote=@Crimson Flame] And now Danny is done. All of you were having discussions with knowing Caty, who wants a preestablished relationship with Danny? :D [/quote] Danny's looking great! I really like that the symbiote event really left Danny with consequences. His sister may have forgiven him, but New York hasn't even though it's been a while. I'm sure Otto would've reached out to him as well after he and Caty revealed their secrets to each other. Helped him maybe embrace this new angle of his that the symbiote provided him. At least when it came to scaring criminals. Meanwhile Caty would be in his ear telling him to save more people. [quote=@Polaris North] I just want to say, the twin rivalry over Felix before just leaving him behind is kind of funny. Definitely, something Sam would hold above Felix's head if she ever found out. I might add more into Sam's backstory to give more insight into her vigilante days. [/quote] Lol thank you. It really felt like one of those teen dramas where the best friends chose each other in the end. And Felix definitely isn't going to live that down. But he won't give up on Caty either. And I'm looking forward to it if you do.