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[@Estylwen][@Theyra] Right, pick one skill, not two, for your Personal Refinement.

Anyhow, Theyra, just do a grammar check of your backstory, and I don’t have any issues with it. It wouldn’t be as a result of Voi’s travels though. He’d have been intrinsically drawn towards Oratorio.

As well, word his Divine Protection so that it doesn’t include his name. Those things serve as a passive boon that affect everyone under the Domain of Souls, rather than Voi specifically.
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Okay, I have made some edits and changed his starting benefit to having the 300 wealth. Is this better?