I have altered the bio so Ahmos was a Goa'uld who defected. I hope that will suffice but if not tell me what you'd like changed and I can do my best to alter it.

Just saw the nit pics from you guys. Not to worry I'll get on it. I did write this in the early hours last night lol

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Ok I have updated the bio. I hope it is more acceptable now. I also ironed out the idea of the combat. Sorry it was my bad, he was supposed to be an efficient assassin grade fighter. He works best when not seen.