@MMM: Looks good. Although I'd like if there was an explanation for why he's in Japan. Also, while it's fine for him to wear armour like that while working, he'll probably need some normal clothes for the rest of the time.

@Parteebear: I'm not entirely sure I get why a mage's school would only let someone in because of their nationality. But other than that, it looks good.

@Others: Accepted.