[quote=nattylight1992]
Your Characters Motivation: Darcey is a petty criminal so she can put food on the table for her son
.History: She is the black sheep in the family and upon getting pregnant, out of wedlock, at the age of 19 she was promptly disowned by her whole family. Darcy works as a bar maid at The Kilted Gnome, which insures that she hears all the local gossip as well as any of the shady deals that go on under her watch. When she's not at work, or robbing people blind right under their noses, Darcey can be found spending time with her 5 year old son Bartley.
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For the most part I like your Character, I just have a couple comments.
motivation: you say she needs to steal to get enough for her and her son to eat. Later you say she works at the Kilted Gnome. A job as a barmaid would easily pay her expenses.
I understand the disowning part but just to let you know, This is more historical fiction than fantasy. This means a girl will often marry as early as 13 or 14. 
other than that, just know that again, this is not really fantasy, in fact Elid is fairly based off London, or as much as I know about it..