[quote]Well first of all, just to let you know, good and bad guys are not so dry cut in Elid. A person, take a priest for example, may seem like a good person, doing what is best for others, and priests of Eia preach purity. But every living person has prices and sometimes does things that might not be considered so righteous. For example, while our priest is generally a good person, he sometimes has to resort to contacting a criminal to take care of something. Or perhaps he is promised a huge amount of money to get some person kicked out of the church, for enough benefit to himself he will, its human nature.[/quote]

Alright. I like this idea. But you did say "contacting a criminal," so a player could be a straight-up criminal with all the worst intentions, but they could also be a normal person forced into desperation.

[quote]Now on to your second point, What you are describing is a character that to me sounds quite like they could be one of the silver (ill have more info on them later), though they could very easily work alone. And yes, there is a city guard.[/quote]

A ex-Silver with more good intentions than bad, perhaps?

[quote]Now, lastly, as far as weapons go, Elid is somewhere between the medieval times and Renaissance-esque times, as such, there are swords, lances, spears, etc. of all shapes and sizes, and bows and crossbows that cover most of the weapons. Also, basic siege weapons exist (though I dont see why or how you could get one of these) and while poisons do exist, they are not the kind you find in fantasy that you rub on a dagger and after stabbing someone they begin feeling weary and then die.[/quote]

Fantastic. How about control? Is it a place where anyone can carry a sword, or are only the guards supposed to have weapons? That would change whether my weapon is a special hand-crafted blade or if is just whatever I could find, although I would expect a mercenary to be allowed to carry a weapon of some kind.

[quote]Any poisons that would be discovered yet would be things that work best over long periods of time of being fed in food and drink. Any poisoned weapons would just help infect the wound rather than actually poisoning them. However, this can be effective if you done need them to die right away, as doctors and medicine is not very advanced yet.[/quote]

Good. I wasn't planning on working with poison anyway. As a holy city, though, I would expect that medicine be relatively advanced.

I'll post a character sheet later today for your review.