Posted response to Renose. Hey so I hope it was okay I just copied some of the stuff you had posted word for word. Just in Moon In-Sun and Serene's view. It was written well and I felt it would be pointless for me to write it in a different way. If there is any problems let me know and I will change it. :)

Also Moon In-Sun is not staying. He is there to show her where he found her. I was think if you have a fight scene he would be injured or get lost in a crowd or something. Just so ya know.