@pyroman: Haha, was just editing my post to include you and your CS. 
Things are lookin' real good pyro. There are two issues that need to be addressed, I think, the first being 'persons of interest' in the village. Simple question is all: Atrus' is still living with his parents, ya? (they're not dead or gone or anything?) 

The other issue is a bit more complex, being the skills section of your CS: I think it would be a bit more conducive to list out all the skills your character possesses in both the 'class' and 'village' sections. The limits are 4 and 3 respectively and right now and while I'm seeing 3 'village skills' (herbalism, reading, writing), I'm only seeing 1 class skill (alchemy). Now I thought that you'd mentioned him being a scholarly alchemist rather than a magical alchemist but I may have been mistaken? I have to check with Astarael but I think we're full on 'mage' characters (we only wanted two in the party) and either way we'd require specific 'Cantrips' (basic magic tricks) listed out and filling Class Skill slots (see Astarael or my CS's for reference to that). 

I don't mind the first person viewpoint at all but I think for those particular sections we'd like a bit more detail and specificity.