Titanic, it's not a big issue but could you not switch from third-person to first-person and then back to third-person perspective? It's kinda weird to read.

Also, I did some editing of my Nation sheet, making my capital's population larger. Because it's smaller population didn't really mesh with everything else I'd come up with for my nation, and was more of a relic from previous thinking before I decided exactly what I wanted. I hope that's okay.