[quote=Voltus_Ventus]
Daxius' concentration was broken when the door to the tavern was thrown open by a small 'person' holding a dead animal in his hands, with his thought broken he noticed how thirsty he felt, he looked around the tavern for the barmaid when he spotted her. She was sat on the floor beneath the stairs, her arms wrapped around her in almost a self hug. Daxius waved to her, trying to get her attention. She looked up from her feet and skimmed the room with her eyes until they landed on Daxius waving his hand at her. Daxius watched her get up and proceed to walk to him, deftly slipping her way between narrow gaps between tables. -Daxius uses his 5 perception skills to notice more details about her- He stood up from his chair as she approached And watched her slip between the last two tables before she was in the secluded corner. She stood short compared to Dax, the too of her head reaching the base of his chin, with a rasp he proceeded to make his request:" excuse me miss, but I'd like a glass of clean water," his voice was abrasive to his ears after long weeks of disuse "none of that brown stuff the elf was supplied with."
He waited for her to reply buy she just nodded and started to turn around when he tasked something else:" would you happen to have an apple?" 
ps. What does the barmaid look like?
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Hi as per the normal table top type thing I control all NPC's.
Don't worry about it right now but what this means is that the barmaid may not do exactly as you have said ( I plan on her talking a little , mostly about that that's the best water you will get in this town and that its a lot cleaner to buy some alcohol) 
Everything else was fine and there is no need to edit I just thought I should mention it, if I don't control the NPC's all im doing is dice rolls and that's pretty boring ;P