IC is up! Yipee! @orcpunx: It's looking really good! I think we would like to see just a tad bit more backstory/history simply because it's a little bare right at the moment. A few things: The village is very small and so unlikely that anyone would own any slaves (slavery is also illegal in most areas of the Faerun). It would be perfectly reasonable for Argurios to be born elsewhere (most likely in the closest city of Athkatla, in Amn), after which his mother was freed and married Rakanr, and then they moved to the village to settle down when he was a baby. Owning slaves would likely mean that Rakanr was someone influential or rich, perhaps an adventurer of old or even some kind of military leader/commander, in which case it would be nice if you'd give a brief explanation of why he left the city and moved to the isolated countryside. Equipment looks good. Class Skills: You list 'basic wound healing' but I didn't see much mention of why/where he learned that in his backstory? Axefighting, Sling Use, Bow use. Bowcrafting would be a fifth skill (we'd only like to see 4 here), so might I suggest dropping bow use/bow crafting and focusing on something related to leatherworking? (leather repairs, tanning, ect) Villager Skills: farming, cooking, and 'basic house repairs'? Do you mean carpentry, perhaps?