[quote][i]Long ago, the Ancient races and the humans lived together as one. They shared the land and it was a time of glorious peace. But one day, a Mage by the name of Elderic grew envious of the power of the Ancient one's. He began to study magic forbidden by nature, gaining power no mortal was meant to hold, but even so it was not enough for him. It wasn't long before he found another who held his greed. The leader of the Veldic clan. He wanted no power, mealy the greed of riches and glory. Forming an alliance, they began to work to get the other the clans on there side. Using a mix of forbidden magic and bribery, Elderic and the leader took control of the clans. It was shortly after that Elderic slew his partner, having no intention of sharing this power with anyone. With all the clans under his control, Elderic took control of the human race, and began plotting against the Ancients. --- For years, Elderic built his army. Gather a mass unseen at the time. He knew he had no hope to outmatch the Ancients, but he would use sheer force of number to slay them. Over the years, he sent assassins to make silent strikes against the Ancients, never being suspected. The Ancients believed Elderic to be a wise and loving Mage, how wrong they were. Over the years, he kept the pretense of peace and friendliness. Though he used the Veldic clans wealth to train and arm his massive army. After eleven long years.... he struck the first blow. --- Sending a group of Veldic saba tours and Reku magicians to the great Gi'Eld mountains, he struck against the dragons. During their mating season, he had his men use a mix of explosives and magic to bring the grand mountain down, bringing with it most of the Dragonkin. The Ancient Races were enraged, but Elderic convenience them the men acted alone in this. He slew his own men before the Elvin king in retribution. Though now wary, The Ancients did not hold the human race accountable for the actions of these men. Eldrics plan was working without fail. --- Elderic had many of the Dwarven mines collapsed, he turned the orcs against one another, and poisoned the water of the elves. But after one more year of these silent attacks, Elderic brought forth his army to the Lunario forest, holy ground to the elven race. King Arato intercepted the great force and held back the army as they tried to set fire to the forest, but he tried in vein. The Elves outmatched the humans, by number overwhelmed them. The king was forced to flee. The holy site was lost to the world forever.[/i] --- [center][b]Centuries Later[/b][/center] The Ancient races still continue the war against the humans. The Mage Elderic vanished soon after the war was started. Most count him among the dead, but not all. The humans have taken a king to rule their land. King Palan, direct descendent of the great Mage Elderic. He hold the same ambition of his Ancestor. The fighting has continued for the centuries with nether side weaning. The Dragons refuse to fight for fear of extinction. The Dwarves are starting to talk of retreating into their mines and the Elves continue the fight. The Vakgar - A Kingdom full of Ancient Races. Elves, Dragons, Dwarves, and Orcs hold this land. It is located near the great eastern ocean of the world. The land is covered by deep lush forest, and mountains that reach far past the clouds. The rich lands or filled with magic, that seems to hang in the very air of the Ancient Kingdom. The Elven King Arato has ruled over the land since time immortal. Though each of the ancient races have their own leaders, he governs them all. [hider=Races] [b]Elves[/b] ~~~ Well balanced in all areas of fighting, and of very apt in the mystic ways. They live in the capital of the Kingdom known as Acheron, which is in the center of the kingdom. [b]Dwarves[/b] ~~~ Strong hardy, enduring race. They live in the within and around the great mountains, tunneling and living within the earth. They are a proud and stubborn race, and will rarely bend to the will of others. [b]Orcs[/b] ~~~ A Brutish race relying on their strength and power to keep them through the test of time and war. They frown upon all use of magic, seeing it as the black arts, though they fear it more then anything. They live within roaming tribes around the lands of Vakgar. [b]Dragons[/b] ~~~ Said to be the most powerful creatures in existence, but a dying race all the same. Do to the meddling of a mage, their race is now all but extent. The few remaining live high within the caves of the great mountains. --- [b]Cartharg[/b] ~~~ [i]The kingdom of the humans, ruled by the sorcerer king, Palan. The land is covered with roaming hills, and long grassy plains. The mountains within this land pale to those of the Vakgar, but the soil is rich and fertile. Thought ruled by King Palan, the Kingdom of Cartharg is shared by the three great Clans.[/i] [b]The Veldic[/b] ~~~ [i]The wealthiest, and most untrustworthy clan. They are skilled in the art of deception, making them perfect assassins and thieves. They are more likely to stab you in the back rather then shake your hand. They make their home in the grand city of Cybele.[/i] [b]The Bkir[/b] ~~~ [i]They are the strongest and most noble men and women within Cartharg. They hold their honor above all else, even their lives. They are stubborn and enduring, and always ready for a fight. They make their home In the Ald Field Meadows in the village of Shoregrove.[/i] [b]The Reku[/b] ~~~ [i]The wisest of all the clans. They are scholars by most, but many within this clan are well versed in the arcane ways. Though due to the Mage Elderic, they are the most hated of the human races. Their home is the city of Vergate in the Sanharst Valley.[/i][/hider] [hider=Places of Note] [b]Crystalmist Haven[/b] [i]The only neutral ground between the two kingdoms due to ancient magic that prohibits any hostile act.[/i] [b]Highhollow Barrens[/b] [i]No man's land. This is a dark foreboding land within the Kingdom of Carthage. It is filled with a dark despair, as the filling of death hangs in the air.[/i] [b]Vergate[/b] [i]Home of the Reku Clan[/i] [b]Shoregrove[/b] [i]Home of the Bkir Clan[/i] [b]Cybele[/b] [i]Trade center for the Kingdom of Carthage, and home of the Veldic Clan.[/i] [b]Melthorn[/b] [i]Home of the elves, and capital of the Vakgar Kingdom.[/i] [b]Lunario Forest[/b] [i]Holy site of the elves, Destroyed by the mage Elderic.[/i] [b]Gi' Eld Mountains[/b] [i]Former home of the dragons, destroyed by the mage Elderic.[/i][/hider] ~~ [i][b]Unfortunately, since the wipe I've decided to restart from the beginning. Unless someone has something of a summary of what had last transpired.[/b][/i] Name: Age: Race: Appearance: Weapons: Extra: (feel free to add anything extra.)[/quote] Some corrections to the first post here and there and making it good for the eyes. press view raw to see the changes and copypaste it in the first post