Tzarima, thank you! You're amazing :) 

Nightwing, hired muscle hmmm? That hadn't crossed my mind yet. When I was trying to think of how a desert city would act/run and I kept thinking about Aladin, the Disney movie. It's been awhile since I've last watched, say, 14 or 15 years ago? But you're right, a desert city like Almeria deserves to be the thieves captial.

I don't have a problem with you adding more back story, I wrote somewhere, the more backstory will help you in the future.

Providence
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Being taken hostage isn't exactly advantageous for her. So any chance she sees to get out (say, a group of people escaping the cellar), she'd probably take.
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That may be, but just remember, Narcia may not be freed until someone from our group frees her. She is more than welcome to join the fight afterwards.